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Eddies Rainy day adventure

Posted: Wed May 17, 2006 10:14 pm
by sleeprsteve
This is a story I wrote for my son and his mates in march.
based on a true story

Eddie's Rainy day adventure
Starring Eddie the Indian ring neck parrot
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All stunts performed by Eddie
Pictures's and word's by dad
Steve Morris



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Eddie looking outside

It was Tuesday at lunchtime, and pouring with rain,
Poor Eddie the ring neck, was going insane
She sat on the couch, and looked out the door
She’d already destroyed, the things on the floor

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Dad, can I go out and play?

She wanted to go out, and play in the rain,
Because I wouldn’t let her, was being a pain
She snuck off with my filters, tore open the pack,
She must have been watching, till I turned my back,


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It's not Fair!


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I,m going to wreck these!

She pulled out the filters, and tore them to bits
She knew that the damage, would give me the ****s
Then I thought, does it matter, if Eddie gets wet
She’d be wet in a tree, if she wasn’t a pet

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Eddie wrecking my filters

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Eddie in the rain

I took her outside, and she spread out her wings
Fluffed up her body, and started to sing
She hopped, skipped and jumped, all over the place
And I’m sure that I saw, a smile on her face

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Pass the shampoo please



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Flying in the rain

She put her head down, and let the rain through
Then all of her feathers, looked shiny and new
The rain had eased off, and Eddie looked glum
She looked at me funny, like I’d stopped her fun

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I'm ready to go inside now



I put out my hand, and Eddie jumped on
We went back inside, and nothing was wrong
Eddie was happy, and now so was I
And I didn’t care, how much time had gone by

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That suns warm, and thats a pretty bird in the window

She stood on the couch, and out came the sun
So she ended up dry, and still had some fun
And what had it cost, some time from my day
You should never be, to busy to play!

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"Hey dad, look at me"

Coming soon " Eddie's Moto-X adventure"
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Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 1:53 am
by Neokireina
I loved it, what awesome pictures. Such a pretty bird.

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 4:58 am
by elaine
I loved the pics and the poem. I smiled all the way through. What a wonderful bird you have.

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 5:38 am
by julie
your funny :D

Great story and pics!!

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:42 am
by Ed Loschi
Yeah,

Great story. I love epic poetry especially with pics. HAHA!

Well done.

Post a video of Eddie driving that dirt bike

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 7:46 am
by Ed Loschi
Forgot to add.

Post a video of Eddie driving that dirt bike.

And I'm honored by his name. I almost named my guy Eddie Jr. HEHEHE. But that would have been too weird even for my friends and family.

Regards, Eddie Loschi

loved it

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 3:34 pm
by natalie
Bravo, encore...... we want more. that was so cool, please we want the next episode!!! Does eddie do autographs!!!!! Natalie xxxx :)

Posted: Thu May 18, 2006 4:42 pm
by Jade
EXCELLENT - my son will love that story when i show him!!

Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 1:04 am
by sleeprsteve
Thank you all for the comment's and the warm welcome to your board!
I'm not sure if Eddie would stand on the scanner long enough to get an autograph, but i'm sure she would walk through any paint i was playing with!
I was going to try and get some photos for the moto-x story today, but the weatherman didn't pay any attention to my e-mail, I will be talking to him about that!
Stay tuned,
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Eddie checking chain tension, safty first kids,
as Eddie does all her own stunt's

Posted: Fri May 19, 2006 6:45 am
by Dani03
That was cute! I just love your bird! That color...just stunning

Dani Prinny Bodi